Recently I've taken up the old Geneva Bible (1660) the Bible of the reformers and the non-conformists. (Which, not surprisingly, they strongly preferred to the "Authorized Version" of King James, who persecuted them.) I'm finding a lot of interesting variants, as well as margin comments. Here are a few I've come across, placed alongside the AV rendering (with the modern spelling):
The "bud of the herb", Genesis 1.12:
"And the earth brought forth grass, and herb yielding seed after his kind..." (AV)
"And the earth broght forthe the budde of the herbe, that sedeth seed according to his kinde..." (Geneva)
There is an interesting margin note on Genesis 1.16, regarding the creation of the greater and lesser lights. It touches on the phenomenal aspect of the language:
"To wit, the sunne and the moone: and here he speaketh as man iudgeth by his eye: for els the moone is lesse then the planete Saturnns"[1]
For good or bad, "whales" is also used in 1.21:
"Then God created the great whales, and euerie thing liuing and mouing..." (Geneva)
Here is the explanation given of the "image and likeness" of 1.26 as given in the margin:
"This image and licknes of God in man is expounded Ephes 4.24: where it is writen, ye man was created after God in righteousnes and true holines, meaning by these two wordes all perfection, as wisdome, trueth, innocencie, power, etc."
"Breathed in his face" from 2.7:
"And the Lord God formed man of the dust of the ground, and breathed into his nostrils the breath of life; and man became a living soul." (AV)
"The Lord God also made the man of the dust of the grounde, and breathed in his face breath of life, and the man was a liuing soule." (Geneva)
"Dye the death" from 2.17:
"But of the tree of the knowledge of good and evil, thou shalt not eat of it: for in the day that thou eatest thereof thou shalt surely die." (AV)
"But as touching the tre of knowledge of good and euil, thou shalt not eat of it: for whensoeuer thou eatest thereof, thou shalt dye the death." (Geneva)
Adam's motivation for sinning is explained in the note for 3.6, in which verse the woman gives the forbidden fruit to him, and he eats. It is suggested that he was not so much pressured to do what his wife wanted, but rather that he became moved by the same desire for godhood:
"Not so muche to please his wife, as moued by ambicion at her persuasion."
The margin note on 3.14 explains why God asked questions of the fallen man and woman, but not the serpent:
"He asked ye reason of Adam and his wife, because he wolde bring them to repentance, but he asketh not the serpent, because he wolde shewe him no mercie."
"Shall be subject" is inserted into 3.16, as opposed to the simple "shall be" of the AV:
"Unto the woman he said, I will greatly multiply thy sorrow and thy conception; in sorrow thou shalt bring forth children; and thy desire shall be to thy husband, and he shall rule over thee." (AV)
"Vnto the woman he said, I wil greately increase thy sorowes, and thy conceptions. In sorowe shalt thou bring forthe children, and thy desire shall be subject to thine housband, and he shal rule ouer thee." (Geneva)
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1. I had trouble making out the spelling of the last word in my copy of this comment. You will want to double-check all of my Geneva quotes given in this post if you are concerned with precise spelling.